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ZACK MEETS FLITTER

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Part 1
It is said that two young mares also at the age of 12  recieved a revelation and was offered holy armor at a sanctuary.

Zack met a young filly in Cloudsdale and was taken to the temple.

The sanctuary was tranquil. After offering prayers, the mare turned and stared at Zack.

Flitter: "You're seeking the evil sword, aren't you? That sword is to dangerous for you. Let us help."
Cloudchaser: "yea let us help too!"

Zack: "I don't need your damn help!"
Zack yelled

These young mares received the revelation of princess Celestia  With there holy weapons, the sisters are is sworn to save those who foolishly seek the evil sword and destroy the wicked weapon.

Zack defeated Flitter and cloudchaser the mares are half dead.

He shouted at the sky.

"I have defeated your little girls! Now give me the invincible sword!"

But celestia was silent.

Zack's  voice echoed in vain.

"Why? Why?"

Burying himself deeper into insanity, Zack laid waste to the sanctuary.
In the rubble he discovered the long "Atlas Sword" hidden in a column.
He said to the unconscious mares
"I'm sorry I hope I didn't kill you" zack said crying a little and he left.


Part 2
A few days later flitter and cloudchaser are all most healed "Why did he do this to us!?!?" She said crying "well" cloudchaser trying to think what to say. it is 5:00 a.m and the girls hadn't slept any "I thought he liked me I just wanted to come with him!" She said as tears ran down her eyes. " I know but I'm sure zack didn't mean it."cloudchaser said trying to get flitter to clam down "he was my coltfriend once.." Said cloudchaser the rain has pouring down harder "yea until you two did the thing and daddy caught you." Said flitter "did you really bring that up?! It was just a thing ok... I know I was just 10 but.." "But what?" Flitter interrupted "you two had sex is that enough?!" Flitter shouted "ok ok I get but don't be loud about it come on we gota get moving..." "Ok" flitter said shaking her head the girls then got up and left after the rain and continued Traveling.
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